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Chasing Mr. Wright: Book 1 Of The Fated Hearts Series, by Aimee Nicole Walker

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Chasing Mr. Wright: Book 1 Of The Fated Hearts Series, by Aimee Nicole Walker

Chasing Mr. Wright: Book 1 Of The Fated Hearts Series, by Aimee Nicole Walker



Chasing Mr. Wright: Book 1 Of The Fated Hearts Series, by Aimee Nicole Walker

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Chasing Mr. Wright is book one in the Fated Hearts Series and is the latest novel from Amazon bestselling author, Aimee Nicole Walker. Grayson Wright is a man who knows how to do many things. He knows how to follow his dream and create a company, Wright Creations, alongside his brother. He knows how to be a good son, brother, friend, and employer. Grayson doesn’t know how to fix his toxic relationship with his long-time boyfriend. Grayson decides to throw his boyfriend a surprise birthday party as a last ditch effort to rekindle the old spark, but it’s Gray who gets the surprise of his life when he turns on the lights and learns the ugly truth about his life. Now at age 32, he re-evaluates who he is, what he wants out of life, and the kind of man he wants to give his heart to. Chase Rivers has an MBA from Georgetown with a minor in marketing. His life starts looking up when he accepts an entry level position at an ad agency. It isn’t his dream job, but it’s a great start and it just feels right to him. He hopes this new beginning in his professional life will spill over into his personal life. Chase is unlucky in love and draws every loser, liar and cheater like a magnet. He’s an expert at finding the perfect mate for his friends, but strikes out every time for himself. He gives up on finding Mr. Right and agrees to a date with Mr. Right Now out of loneliness and desperation. Chase didn’t expect Mr. Right Now to lead him to the doorstep of his very own Mr. Wright. If their first meeting was a fluke, then what was the second and third? Twisted fate? Bad luck? Fated hearts? Buckle up for a bumpy ride as these two men travel down a broken road of heartache and discovery. This book contains heart, humor, heat, and a cast of characters that is sure to keep you smiling. It contains adult language, explicit sexual acts between two men, and is intended for people who are 18 and older.

Chasing Mr. Wright: Book 1 Of The Fated Hearts Series, by Aimee Nicole Walker

  • Amazon Sales Rank: #19301 in eBooks
  • Published on: 2015-05-05
  • Released on: 2015-05-05
  • Format: Kindle eBook
Chasing Mr. Wright: Book 1 Of The Fated Hearts Series, by Aimee Nicole Walker


Chasing Mr. Wright: Book 1 Of The Fated Hearts Series, by Aimee Nicole Walker

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16 of 17 people found the following review helpful. Editing So Poor, It's Virtually Unreadable. By Alan Arthur Katz I hate giving bad reviews. Really. Normally, if a book is just plain bad, I don't bother reviewing it because that just gives it more attention than it deserves.But I occasionally will review a book that's poorly written if I believe the author has some talent and both she, and her readers, need to be made aware of her issues so that maybe, she will improve and grow and become an author I adore. That has happened more than once. The first books of N. R. Walker struck me as being pretty much amateur fan fiction. It turned out that's exactly what they were, fan fiction that got published. However, over the course of just a year-or-so, N. R. Walker developed into one of the finest authors of gay fiction writing today. I would never have guessed it had I only read the first couple of books, but her later books and series ("Red Dirt Heart" and "Cronin's Key") are among the finest fiction, of any genre, I've ever read.Hence, I''m willing to take the time to seriously consider this other Walker's (Aimee Nicole Walker - no relation, as far as I know) book, Chasing Mr. Wright. Beneath the surface I see the glimmer of talent trying to break through. Some paragraphs, even whole sections, display hints of elegance and promise, and I hope that, with an appropriate editor and guidance, Ms. Walker will shine through and show us her potential, fulfilled.First of all, in the interest of full disclosure, let me state that I was unable to finish reading Chasing Mr. Wright. About half way through this long tome, I gave up and skimmed to the end. I had to stop for one reason - the editing was nothing less than abhorrent. To me, the book was unreadable. I was so mired in all the Middle School spelling errors, grammar errors, and word-misuse, that I just couldn't keep my head in the story anymore. And that's a terrible shame because, although it was overlong, derivative and rarely credible, I was hooked by the story and saw possibilities for the characters, despite their stupid 12-year-old-girl behavior. I saw a glimmer of something interesting in Ms. Walker's intentions, an outline for a really good tale, characters who were almost charismatic and empathetic and situations with great potential (such as the MC's "Gram" being a famous gay romance author - but where else have I read that meme before?).There are days when I wonder if half the authors of gay fiction (or just self-published authors of gay fiction) don't bother editing at all, or share the same incompetent editor, because they all seem to make the identical errors: "you're" for "your", apostrophes in plurals (never, never, never!), bad hyphenation ("button down shirt" wrong. "button-down shirt" right.) Authors misspell their own characters' names (in this book, "Ava" seems to morph to "Ave" and back again, sometimes in the same sentence). Almost every self-published author uses this phrase wrong: "It didn't phase him", which should be "it didn't faze him". But one of my favorites from this book is when the MC is asked to design a birthday cake for an old lady's anniversary. Hey, Ms. Walker, if the cake is for a 50th anniversary, it's an anniversary cake, not a birthday cake.This book was rife with disturbing, near-illiterate writing, such as "I listened aptly..." instead of "I listened raptly", and (arrrgggghhh) "I could have went straight home" instead of "gone straight home". That's the kind of mistake that makes the speaker sound completely illiterate. And, speaking of education, her MC, who is a graphic artist who designs logos, etc. has just gotten his MBA degree? Why would an artist get an advanced business degree - planning to be a stock trader while painting in his atelier? The graduate degree a graphic artist would get would be an MFA (Master of Fine Arts), not MBA (Master of Business Administration). What is this, Donald Trump with a paintbrush?Of course, none of that is much worse than the MC exclaiming "I smiled at the site before me". I'm sure Ms. Walker was not writing about a construction project, she just used "site" where she should have used "sight". One of the most annoying tics of this manuscript (it is certainly not a completed book) was the author's tendency to insert the letter "a" before days of the week, such as "I'll be returning at the end of the week on a Friday", or "When a Monday came...". What is with that? I can't even imagine the logic of that particular oft-repeated construction.The examples I gave are just a handful among hundreds in Chasing Mr. Wright. Look, I know that quite a few brilliant authors are not great at spelling and basic grammar, which is why they use editors. What baffles me is how few independent authors even bother to use spell check, let alone hire an editor. Spelling and grammar checkers can't find everything, but they can find perhaps 70% of the issues. The rest is why you have an editor, an actual human being who can read, spell and correct. If Ms. Walker used an editor, he or she should probably be shot. I got through approximately 100 pages of this embarrassing writing and just couldn't continue on. I felt too bad for the author.Let's be honest, if this were any Amazon product other than a book, it would be returned with loud complaints and a demand for a refund. Books are about language, and if that's true, Chasing Mr. Wright is just a highly defective product.Please, Ms. Walker, this book is so damaged it is harming your reputation. Yes, you got quite a number of five-star reviews (though honestly, I can't figure out how that was possible), but a nearly equal number of 1- and 2-star reviews, each and every one of which complained about the execrable editing. You owe it to yourself, your talent and your readers to publish your best work, or at very least a finished work.A book is not finished until it is edited - and more than once. I'm not returning this book for a refund, because I got it free on Kindle Unlimited, but if I had paid, I'd be returning it now.Re-edit, polish and re-publish the book - I'll look forward to reading it again, from the top.Alan reviews gay fiction for the Sinfully Addicted... blog.

28 of 36 people found the following review helpful. This was a No Go for me By HaloLove The story started off truly well but the further I read the more it fell apart for me.-sigh- Bad editing, cringe worthy dialogue, ridiculous misunderstandings, everyone was either stunning, handsome, beautiful or gorgeous and it's stated non-stop, and there was way too much sex to define a romantic relationship for two people who desperately were looking for a love they could trust and spend their life with.What made the story worse:"Her cheeks were flushed pink, giving her that healthy glow that only fair skinned women get." -roll my eyes-I've seen plenty of non fair women that have that exact glow!-----------"I told him that I did not believe that a bisexual man would ever be completely happy with one sex or the other." Chasing Mr. Wright: Book 1 Of The Fated Hearts Series, by Aimee Nicole Walker


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